You could do better than that!

It could be better, a lot better. First, we don't have the time to see what the characters saying. Second, the drawing could be better, try to work harder on your drawing. But it's cool.
Continu to work.

I think it has a big potential

Your movie is very good. But when we die, we go to a place who we have to kill 2 clock. I think that is a good idea. Because I hate the fucking clocks. The problem is when we kill them, the game stop. We can't do anything, just moving and shooting.
Continue you are in the good way.